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Unfounded Reason

Maybe I'll still be by your side
When you awake from another hard day's night
Maybe I'll be waiting
With one hand still on my palpitating heart
And the other resting on the keys of a dusty piano
And the sun shines on your hair
I'm trying to find a reason for leaving you.

Always lost in your own little mind
yet something so little holds such a brilliance
That cannot compare to anything I have ever considered genius
Always lost in your music,
Your soothing tunes...
Somewhere in there you'll always find me as well.
Always remain my pillow.
I know it sounds strange
But your shoulder is the only one I ever want to dream on
The only shoulder I ever want to cry on...

I'm trying to find a reason for leaving you.

I let you come just close enough,
But you were always so far away
In the basement of your thoughts
And I tried to turn a light on
But the bulb has lost it's brilliance and will not glow...
You never told me not to go
But I stayed in your world as long as I could.

Now I'm trying to find a reason for leaving you.

But then all I'd be is someone missing your smile
Longing for your laugh
Your eyes glowing with a rare beam of joy
I'll always miss the you that nothing could destroy.
No matter where I am.

There must be a reason for leaving you.

Maybe I'll find it someday.
©2002-2009 ~lowra
:iconlowra:

Author's Comments

This hasn't happened to me yet. I don't know if it will. But in one of my dreams last night, I got the inspiration for this....

Let me know what you think...this came from my soul.

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:iconbloodchild09:
oh. my. god.
laura... this is...
wow.
i really don't know what to say except

Worship Worship welcome to maya's favorites Worship Worship

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we all float down here
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:iconforrestrose:
I always insist on reading poetry even though I'm so bad with understanding it. I still like reading a good one tho : ) nice.
:iconmarcyintellect:
stay gold, lala

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"Oh, the cleverness of you..."
:iconneywon:
Simply beautiful, so very well done. Very emotional.
:iconspottysalamander:
wow... I hope you don't have to feel like leaving someone... although it may happen, and then you'll havea beautiful poem about it...

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Love, Ceci
:iconsatyrgirl:
i know i said i dont like your so emotional writing too much. could be cuz i'm jealous cuz i cant write that well. i was just reminded of that possibility when i read this.

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and if the band you're in starts playing different tunes i'll see you on the dark side of the moon

there is no dark side of the moon, really. matter of fact it's all dark.
:iconkanachi:
"In the basement of your thoughts
And I tried to turn a light on
But the bulb has lost it's brilliance and will not glow..."

Excelent lines, I love the wording. This is very emotive.
:iconbluenine:
Quite possibly my favorite poem of yours. This is extremely well written. Your writing has really improved, and you have gained much more of my respect. Keep deviating.

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(¯`·.,¸¸,.·´¯`·.·• blueNINE
:iconangelbelle:
^ oh my god! *gasp* heehee

yeah. your poem. duuuuude.... amazing. Worship I love it... it's just awesome.

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'I'm breathing so I guess I'm still alive
Even if signs seem to tell me otherwise'

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