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Lately I've been sick and I want to know
I've learned to grow
What happens now?
Do we all fall down?
Lately I've been gone and I miss you so
Wish I knew where to go
And did you miss me?
Am I still all you see?
Was I ever...
Was I ever the everything over anything
Did you ever wish I were there when your eyes did open
Do you still love me like you did the night
You whispered the words to me

I'm sorry I didn't fight
But I didn't think I'd have to
I thought my love would be enough
But love did take away my sight.
I'm sorry tonight I cry
And I hope you don't mind
But I thought I told you
Love forces you to try
©2002-2009 ~lowra
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So much passion inside me...just waiting to come out...

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:iconcataplasia:
i like it because it but im not sure it relates to me or not.

:iconfairyinboots:
Beautiful, sad, and I sang along the whole way through.

I can relate to this, and I wish I could talk to you soon...

This is great though, thank you.

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:|:|:|:|:|:|:psychotic::|:|

-~DV8~-
:iconserenity69:
that cuts in deep.

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:weed: = :love:
:iconangelbelle:
Oh my god, Brisa, this is amazing. You have such a talent at writing... but I'm really sorry you feel this way. IOVU!!

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'I'm breathing so I guess I'm still alive
Even if signs seem to tell me otherwise'
:iconcreator07:
Isn't poetry a grea outlet?

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:iconspottysalamander:
very nice
I like the rhyme scheme in the second bit a bit more than the first tho

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Love, Ceci
:icon-tank:
i missed you :) (Smile) Love ...this is great...i love the off and on rhyme skeme...and the longing for loving...great work
-tank

-=don't fear to imagine=-
:iconspunj13:
ahyes... a very familiar feeling (all together too familiar for my tastes)... but anyways... i definetly like the light use of rhyme...not forced... and the rhythm is very natural as well

//spunj13

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doctor!doctor!
wind up your soldiers and send them to see, the skies and the oceans their coffins will be

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